story book animal rights

This is the start of my short story book on animal rights
from the prospective of an animal
it's aim is to make the reader question there views on how animals are treated in our modern day society.

it still needs alot of work and probally spelling and gramma corrections

but I'd still really like comments so when I work on it again I can work on area that don't work at all, the book still has a few visual things to go in it,

ps I'm very new too this typography thing so I'm really not very good.